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Creators - Creation - Prologue by ~Waniou:iconWaniou:



  Footsteps came down the cold floor.  A man, wearing a suit, almost white, but in fact was shimmering with all colours.
  Soon he came to a door.  Top Secret, and other such phrases were stuck all over it.  He disregarded them, stepping through the doorway, to eight other people, each wearing a different colour.  
  White, Black, Red, Green, Blue, Grey, Orange, Brown.  A rainbow in themselves.  Behind them stood a large machine, like a giant porcupine, rods sticking out of it, and between them flowed lightning bolts, not just blue, but of each of the colours.
  "Is it finished?" the man of all colours asked.  The woman in white nodded, and led him to beside the machine.
  She quickly placed wires all over his body, especially around his head, until he resembled the machine. "Go," he said, and she pulled a lever.
  The man screamed in pain, as electricity flowed through his body, rippling through him, giving off a light, almost white, but in fact it was shimmering with all colours.
  Suddenly lightning came from the machine, shooting across the walls and roof, each blast a different colour.  White, Black, Red, Green, Blue, Grey, Orange, Brown.  A rainbow in themselves.  Slowly they each found a home inside each of the suited people, each blast hitting a suit of the same colour as it was, filling the room with screams.
  Motionless their bodies lay, but their minds lay not.
©2008-2009 ~Waniou
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Author's Comments

This is the prologue of a future novel of mine. So it's kinda short, but doesn't need to be any longer. I'm not gonna go into any more details right now, if I do, I'll post a journal on it. And no, I won't be uploading the whole novel here, I intend to get it published someday. Once I wrote more. Which will probably be after I work on Might of Ashura more.


Anyway, enjoy, comment, etc. Speculate! What do you think it's all about? I'm curious to hear what you think.

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:iconpammey:
Omg I want to read it further I want to know what's happening O_O
*favs*

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:iconwaniou:
lol, thanks XD I might give Pam some hints over MSN :O But it's like omg uber secret stuff. XD

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The sum of strangeness and charge = ?
:iconpammey:
YAY : D

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:iconnikiq:
This sounds awesome! My favorite description is the "like a porcupine". Very interesting so far, seems like something that could be a good potential source of philosophical debate with that last line. :nod:

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~there's nothing in this world that you can't be if you want it enough~

~life has to end. love doesn't.~

~the dog was created especially for children. he is the god of frolic.~
:iconwaniou:
Haha, that line is actually one of the main bases behind the Creators story. :P But no more spoilers than that.

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The sum of strangeness and charge = ?
:iconnikiq:
Oooh.. Very nice. :nod:

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~there's nothing in this world that you can't be if you want it enough~

~life has to end. love doesn't.~

~the dog was created especially for children. he is the god of frolic.~

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